Amelia’s this week’s star writer as she has written a fantastic piece of writing on Lila’s journey up Mount Merapi. Amelia has edited her work extremely well and written a fantastic story.
This week’s star writer is Joshua when writing the Poinsettia story. He has used excellent vocabulary, used conjunctions and even used a fronted adverbial.
Olivia’s star work this week is the retelling of the Miracle of the Poinsettia story. She has used powerful vocabulary, fronted adverbials and has beautiful handwriting.
This week’s star work is Rudy’s biography. He has listened extremely well in lessons about Roald Dahl’s life and this has helped him write a fantastic biography.
This week’s star work is Kaci’s biography about Roald Dahl. She has used a range of adverbs and fronted adverbials.
This week’s star work is Alfie’s story about The Chocolate Room. He has taken great effort to join his handwriting and it has hugely improved.
This week we have been writing a character description about Willy Wonka. Kaci has taken great care with her handwriting and has made a great effort to use different pronouns.
In English we have been looking at The Twits and focusing on a setting description. Jack has made great effort with his work using adventurous vocabulary and editing his work to further his writing.
In science, Dawood has done some superb work on the experiments he has completed. His writing is very neat and is done to the best of his ability.
Aiden has really tried hard when writing his dream. He came up with some excellent ideas and reallt though about his work. Aiden also did some great editing to up-level his work and has now produced as good piece of work.