Ben has created a fantastic poem about a rough and wild sea using his senses. He has included a range of wonderful vocabulary and has had a go at using onomatopoeia to make his poem come to life. An Excellent piece of writing! Well done, Ben.
Jack worked independently to create a page and a half of writing to retell our class story, ‘The Night Gardener.’ In it he describes the Night Gardener in detail and remembers to include many of the topiaries that we come across throughout the story. Jack has tried hard to correctly place his full stops and has worked on adding in his capital letter. Wonderful work, well done, Jack!
Isabelle thought of a range of wonderful vocabulary, which she then used to create these amazing sentence linked to our Night Gardener story. I like that almost all her sentences begin with something different.
Keira wrote a wonderful character description using some fantastic, well-chosen vocabulary and similes. She really worked hard on this piece of writing and she should be extremely pleased with it. I know I am!