Ryley is this week’s star writer for his great, imaginative rags to riches story. He tried hard to include fronted adverbials and embedded clauses. Well done!
Samantha has earned star writer for her newspaper article on Howard Carter. As you can see she used a range of fronted adverbials and tried to write her facts in interesting ways
Filip is star writer for his imaginative and well written diary entry about time travelling to ancient Egypt. He built excitement and had a great informal style.
Cole did an excellent job on his re-telling of the short film ‘Marshmallows’. He used a range of fronted adverbials and made sure not to use just one kind. He also used a wide range of good vocabulary to describe with language such as: bulging, reptilian and wailing. Well done Cole!
Jessica was star writer this week for her hard work on this information text about Ancient Egypt. She learnt and was able to begin using brackets for parenthesis in her work. Her work had good flow and some amazing language. Well done!