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Star Writers

Lucy has written an interesting poem all about The Grinch and how he stole Christmas from the Whos. Lucy’s work was also chosen to be part of our Christmas display – take a look when you’re around school to see if you can spot it.

Lucy has written an interesting poem all about The Grinch and how he stole Christmas from the Whos. Lucy’s work was also chosen to be part of our Christmas display – take a look when you’re around school to see if you can spot it.  1

A fantastic horror story written by Zayne. He has structured his plot in order to build suspense. Using phrases like ‘Not knowing what disaster was ahead’ and ‘The further in she went, the more lost she was’ really lures the reader in to read more! Well done, Zayne- fabulous effort.

A fantastic horror story written by Zayne. He has structured his plot in order to build suspense. Using phrases like ‘Not knowing what disaster was ahead’ and ‘The further in she went, the more lost she was’ really lures the reader in to read more! Well done, Zayne- fabulous effort.  1
A fantastic horror story written by Zayne. He has structured his plot in order to build suspense. Using phrases like ‘Not knowing what disaster was ahead’ and ‘The further in she went, the more lost she was’ really lures the reader in to read more! Well done, Zayne- fabulous effort.  2

Anna has created an eye catching comic based on the film AntMan. She has used fronted adverbials to make interesting sentences and speech bubbles to give the effect of real comic

Anna has created an eye catching comic based on the film AntMan. She has used fronted adverbials to make interesting sentences and speech bubbles to give the effect of real comic  1
Anna has created an eye catching comic based on the film AntMan. She has used fronted adverbials to make interesting sentences and speech bubbles to give the effect of real comic  2

Marshall has written a great action scene from the film Jumanji, he has used fronted adverbials, a mixture of punctuation and some lovely descriptive language.

Marshall has written a great action scene from the film Jumanji, he has used fronted adverbials, a mixture of punctuation and some lovely descriptive language.  1

Anna has created an eye catching comic based on the film AntMan. She has used fronted adverbials to make interesting sentences and speech bubbles to give the effect of real comic

Anna has created an eye catching comic based on the film AntMan. She has used fronted adverbials to make interesting sentences and speech bubbles to give the effect of real comic  1
Anna has created an eye catching comic based on the film AntMan. She has used fronted adverbials to make interesting sentences and speech bubbles to give the effect of real comic  2

Charley R 56DT Over the last 2 weeks we have been working on creating our own Ant-Man comic. Charley’s comic was chosen as star writer as she has used some interesting fronted adverbials openers. She has also added speech to help tell the story. In the week we will add photos of Charley’s finished version using a comic creator app.

Charley R 56DT Over the last 2 weeks we have been working on creating our own Ant-Man comic. Charley’s comic was chosen as star writer as she has used some interesting fronted adverbials openers. She has also added speech to help tell the story. In the week we will add photos of Charley’s finished version using a comic creator app. 1
Charley R 56DT Over the last 2 weeks we have been working on creating our own Ant-Man comic. Charley’s comic was chosen as star writer as she has used some interesting fronted adverbials openers. She has also added speech to help tell the story. In the week we will add photos of Charley’s finished version using a comic creator app. 2
Charley R 56DT Over the last 2 weeks we have been working on creating our own Ant-Man comic. Charley’s comic was chosen as star writer as she has used some interesting fronted adverbials openers. She has also added speech to help tell the story. In the week we will add photos of Charley’s finished version using a comic creator app. 3

Joe created an interesting short story. He was able to incorporate description and speech to liven up his writing. His varied openers, along with his short sentences for effect grabbed the readers’ attention! Well done, Joe!

Joe created an interesting short story. He was able to incorporate description and speech to liven up his writing. His varied openers, along with his short sentences for effect grabbed the readers’ attention! Well done, Joe!  1
Joe created an interesting short story. He was able to incorporate description and speech to liven up his writing. His varied openers, along with his short sentences for effect grabbed the readers’ attention! Well done, Joe!  2

An excellent retelling of a short animation about a boy and his dream, Zuzanna used the class rubric to add elements into her own writing to make it interesting. She has used conjunctive openers, powerful verbs and onomatopoeia to grab the reader! Well Done, Zuzanna!!

An excellent retelling of a short animation about a boy and his dream, Zuzanna used the class rubric to add elements into her own writing to make it interesting. She has used conjunctive openers, powerful verbs and onomatopoeia to grab the reader! Well Done, Zuzanna!! 1

McKenzie used a variety of techniques from our class’s short story rubric to make his story exciting. His beginning contained subordinating conjunctions and onomatopoeia to add effect. As well as a variety of interesting language McKenzie incorporated similes to add description.

McKenzie used a variety of techniques from our class’s short story rubric to make his story exciting. His beginning contained subordinating conjunctions and onomatopoeia to add effect. As well as a variety of interesting language McKenzie incorporated similes to add description. 1

Megan: A fabulous piece of poetry based on the Holocaust. Megan used onomatopoeia and personification to enhance the pain and suffering Jews went through during WW2. She also used great language to create imagery. Well done, Megan!

Megan: A fabulous piece of poetry based on the Holocaust. Megan used onomatopoeia and personification to enhance the pain and suffering Jews went through during WW2. She also used great language to create imagery. Well done, Megan!  1
Megan: A fabulous piece of poetry based on the Holocaust. Megan used onomatopoeia and personification to enhance the pain and suffering Jews went through during WW2. She also used great language to create imagery. Well done, Megan!  2

Alfie: Lovely piece of writing describing an air raid shelter with a good use of punctuation ? … ! and ()

Alfie:  Lovely piece of writing describing an air raid shelter with a good use of punctuation  ? … ! and () 1
Alfie:  Lovely piece of writing describing an air raid shelter with a good use of punctuation  ? … ! and () 2

Anna B Star Writer w/c 11.9.17 Fabulous recount of an air raid, great use of language and punctuation.

Anna B Star Writer w/c 11.9.17 Fabulous recount of an air raid, great use of language and punctuation. 1
Anna B Star Writer w/c 11.9.17 Fabulous recount of an air raid, great use of language and punctuation. 2
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