McKenzie used a variety of techniques from our class’s short story rubric to make his story exciting. His beginning contained subordinating conjunctions and onomatopoeia to add effect. As well as a variety of interesting language McKenzie incorporated similes to add description.
Megan: A fabulous piece of poetry based on the Holocaust. Megan used onomatopoeia and personification to enhance the pain and suffering Jews went through during WW2. She also used great language to create imagery. Well done, Megan!
Alfie: Lovely piece of writing describing an air raid shelter with a good use of punctuation ? … ! and ()
Anna B Star Writer w/c 11.9.17 Fabulous recount of an air raid, great use of language and punctuation.