Well done Kiarra for an excellent description of your villain. You have also shown that you have can use the main tools in WORD to change the font, size and position of the text as well as being able to copy and paste the image of the villain in to your text.
Well done Daniel for good presentation and descriptions.
Jack for a well sequenced retelling of 'The Coming of the Iron Man'.
Oliver has written a great retell of Hiccup, the Viking who was seasick. He wrote his story independently, trying his best to write in sentences with finger spaces. He has used some lovely description, saying Hiccup’s tummy was ‘fizzy’ when he felt unwell. Great independent work Oliver, well done.
Dylan has written a retell of our class book ‘The Night Gardener’. Dylan has focused on his sentences making sure they make sense and are punctuated correctly with capital letters and full stops. Well done Dylan.
Aleisha has written a recount of Rambles (our class teddy) adventure at Tilly’s house. She has correctly used capital letters and full stops as well as concentrating on her sentences so they make sense. Well done Aliesha.
Cecilia has written a character description of the Night Gardener. She has used some lovely description to help the reader create an image in their readers mind of the gardener’s appearance, such as: ‘prickly moustache like a hedgehog’ and ‘pattern jacket that was white and green’. Well done Cecilia.