Noah – The Three Billy Goat’s Gruff
Noah has been chosen as this week’s Star Writer because he has written a fantastic version of the story. He has used super expanded noun phrases such as ‘luscious, green grass’ and ‘creaky, wooden bridge’. He chose powerful verbs like: approached, appeared and stuttered to describe what was happening in the story and he used great adjectives like dangerous.
A fabulous piece of writing, Noah, well done.
24th January 2019
Aniya has written about our amazing adventure to Australia! She described her feelings on the plane, using commas in-between the words:
Then we got on the airplane I was excited, happy, shocked and I had butterflies in my tummy.
She remembered all of the exciting things that happened on our adventure and wrote them carefully in sentences, checking they made sense.
Great recount Aniya!
Character Description of the giant from
Jack and the Beanstalk
This week, Jayden has been chosen as our Star Writer because he wrote some really descriptive sentences about the giant, including the simile ‘he is as strong as a boxer.’ Jayden also used conjunctions in his writing to join his ideas, such as ‘The giant is angry because Jack took his gold.’
Well done, Jayden and keep up the hard work!